Much better after you correct. Thank you!

Hello, I would like to correct few things : When I was young I was crashed on eating zongzi ---- When I was young, I was fond of eating zongzi. I can eat 4 at one time. But now,the most number is 2. ---- I could eat up to 4 pieces at once, but now I can only eat two at most. Eating zongzi used to be my hobby,but now is like a way to remember my childhood stage which never can come back. -----Eating zongzi was like a hobby for me, but now it's no more than a beautiful childhood memory that I treasure, and a stage of life that will never comeback again. I hope everyone can appreciate time. Time is priceless!

When I was young I was crashed on eating zongzi I can eat 4 at one time. But now,the most number is 2. Eating zongzi used to be my hobby,but now is like a way to remember my childhood stage which never can come back. I hope everyone can appreciate life. life is priceless! I also hope everyone can appreciate time. Time is priceless!