Could you please correct my essay? Q. Do you agree or disagree: when educational budgets are limited priority should be given to raising teachers salaries rather than to improving classroom facilities. In Japan, some schools especially in rural town are not facilitated well. Given that situation, we should put priority on improving classroom facilities for three reasons. Personally, it will directly lead to the quality of education. For instance, introducing PCs will allow students to study more effectively. If you improve the comfort of classroom, more students become willing to study. Secondly, educational budget should be used for students, not for teachers. One of the most important thing of education is to help children, who will play an important role in the society in the future to grow up, so government should put highest priority on students. Thirdly, it also leads to protect students health. As I mentioned, some schools are a lot of air conditioner watermThirdly, it also leads to protect students health. As I mentioned, some schools are a lot of air conditioners, water coolers or other important equipment. Needless to say, what’s more important is health, not salary. As a conclusion, I strongly believe that priority should be given to improving classroom facilities.