(一) My First Entry
你好！ 我叫 Alondra，我的中国名字是任洁影。我的中国人朋友家 gave it to 我。我的汉语学生。我是墨西哥人，我不是中国人。我喜欢狗可爱和我不喜欢跑。
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That was my attempt on writing a short paragraph. I was trying to say: Hello! My name is Alondra, my Chinese name is 'Ren Jie Ying', my Chinese friend's family gave it to me. I am a Chinese language student. I am Mexican, I am not Chinese. I like cute dogs and I dislike running.
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I know I made a lot of mistakes, so please feel free to correct me and give your constructive criticism! 谢谢！
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(一) My First Entry
你好！ 我叫 Alondra，我的中文名字叫任洁影。我中国朋友的家人给我起的。我是汉语学生。我是墨西哥人（我是来自墨西哥的汉语学生），并不是中国人。我喜欢可爱的狗狗，不喜欢跑步。
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(一) My First Entry
你好！ 我叫 Alondra，我的中国名字是任洁影。我的中国朋友给我起的。我是汉语学生。我是墨西哥人，我不是中国人。我喜欢可爱的狗狗，我不喜欢跑步。
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That was my attempt on writing a short paragraph. I was trying to say: Hello! My name is Alondra, my Chinese name is 'Ren Jie Ying', my Chinese friend's family gave it to me. I am a Chinese language student. I am Mexican, I am not Chinese. I like cute dogs and I dislike running.
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I know I made a lot of mistakes, so please feel free to correct me and give your constructive criticism! 谢谢！
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