Chinese holidays of shopping
Jun 21st 2020
People would like to buy things in holiday festival. There’s two holidays of season in China. One is Jun 18th, another one is Nov 11st. They bought many things in these two days because the products were more cheap, free the shipping of delivery, and reach a certain amount it will reduce the cost.
Firstly, we bought many products online in holiday festival. Usually the cost were original price for all the products. There have not any discount. We preferred to bought most things in these two days. People could see the discount of products before the festival. They could put all products together in advance which pay it. Impossible you can got the extra gifts with attractive for business. However, there was a prerequisite, such as you need the pay the cost within two hundred. It can promote the desire to buy product of people.
Secondly, when you bought the product in these two days, it could be free the shipping of delivery. People had to pay the delivery cost around 8 – 20 RMB usually. No matter the size and weight of boxes. But if big one that you need to pay more expensive cost of delivery. But for the holiday festival is free all shipping cost. Even for different seller and quantity of products.
Thirdly, unless the discount and shipping free, people also have another favored. When you bought the producers reach a certain amount, you got the second discount. The seller will set the rules, such as when you buy the products reach 300 RMB will reduce the cost with 40 RMB. Seller use this to attract more customers to buy more products. This is a very good marketing method.
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Chinese holidays of shopping
Jun 21st 2020
People would like to buying things in during the holiday festival. There are two of these holidays of season in China. One is Jun 18th, and the other is Nov 11st. They buy many things in these two days because the products were cheaper, came with free shipping, and reach a certain amount it will reduce the cost.
Firstly, we bought many products online during the holiday festival. Usually the prices were original prices for all the products. There was not any discount. We preferred to buy most things in these two days. People could see the discounts on the products before the festival. They could put all products together in advance which pay it. Impossible you can got the extra gifts with attractive for business. However, there was a prerequisite, such as you need the pay the cost within two hundred. It can increase people's desire to buy products.
Secondly, when you bought the product in these two days, it could come with free shipping. People usually have to pay a delivery cost around 8 – 20 RMB, no matter the size and weight of boxes. But for a big one then you need to pay a bigger delivery fee. But for the holiday festival all shipping is free, even for different sellers and quantities of products.
Thirdly, in addition to the discount and free shipping, people also have another favored. When your order reaches a certain amount, you get a second discount. The seller will set the rules, such as when your order reaches 300 RMB you will get a 40 RMB discount. Sellers use this to attract more customers to buy more products. This is a very good marketing method.
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Well written, this is a good complex topic for your writing practice and I understood it well. I corrected your sentences by native speaker standards, that's a very high standard I'm holding you to.
The three blue sentences in the middle I don't really understand so if you follow up to clarify those I can help you with them.
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Chinese holidays of shopping
Jun 21st 2020
People would like to buy things in the holiday festivals. There are two holidays of seasons in China. One is June 18th, another one is on Nov 11st. They bought many things in these two days because the products were more cheaper, free the shipping of delivery had free shipping, and reaching a certain amount it will reduce the cost.
Firstly, we bought many products online in holiday festival. Usually, the cost were was the original price for all the products. There have not been any discounts. We preferred to bought by most things in these two days. People could see the discount of products before the festival. They could put all products together in advance which pay it. By putting all the products together they could pay in advance. (?) Impossible You can get the extra gifts with which is attractive for business. However, there was a prerequisite, such as you needed the pay the cost within two hundred (dollars?). It can promote the desire to buy product of people. for people to buy the product.
Secondly, when you bought the product in these two days, it could be free the shipping of delivery. it was shipped for free. People that had to pay the delivery cost themselves around 8 – 20 RMB usually, no matter the size and weight of boxes. But if the big one that you needed to pay more expensive cost of delivery.But if it was bigger it was more expensive to deliver. But for the holiday festival it is free all shipping cost. Even for different sellers and quantities of products.
Thirdly, unless the discount and shipping free it is discounted and has free shipping, people also have another favorite. When you bought the producers your purchases reached a certain amount, you got the a second discount. The seller will set the rules, such as when you buy the products your purchases reach 300 RMB they will reduce the cost with by 40 RMB. Sellers use this to attract more customers to buy more products. This is a very good marketing method.
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