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Would you like help me modify my sentences? Thank you. Travel To be honest, I have not traveled abroad. But I am longing for the world of heterogeneous culture, and hope to see the different scenery and meet the different people and custom. I sure that will be another feeling. I like the Barcelona most, if I have a chance, I would like to go to this city. It is known widely that Barcelona is the second largest city in Spain and located in the northeast of the Iberian Peninsula. Because of this and its beautiful scenery, Barcelona is also known as The Pearl of Iberian Peninsula. For me, when it comes to Barcelona, two words fly in my mind immediately: passion and art. The outstanding football club of the world was born here and the Fútbol Club Barcelona have trained many top football players and they have made a remarkable achievement in La Liga. As for art, Barcelona combines the modern city and the classical scenery very well. Moreover, there are a number of art museums and the trace of masters everywhere. In a word, this city can bring me the different feelings, and if I have a chance, it will be my first choice for travel.

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Would you like help me modify my sentences? Thank you.

Travel
To be honest, I have not traveled abroad. But I am longing for the world of heterogeneous culture, and hope to see all the different scenery, and meet the different people, and customs. I’m sure that it will be another feeling. like nothing I’ve felt/experienced before.
I like the Barcelona most, if I have a chance, I would like to go to this city. It is known widely known that Barcelona is the second largest city in Spain and located in the northeast of the Iberian Peninsula. Because of this and its beautiful scenery, Barcelona is also known as The Pearl of Iberian Peninsula.
For me, when it comes to Barcelona, two words fly in my to mind immediately: passion and art. The outstanding football club of the world was born here. and the Fútbol Club Barcelona have trained many top football players and they have made a remarkable achievement in La Liga. As for art, Barcelona combines the modern city and the classical scenery very well. Moreover, there are a number of art museums and the trace of masters everywhere.
In a word, this city can bring me the many different feelings, and if I have a chance, it will be my first choice for travel.

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