18) Keep a diary (Sunday, June 15, 2020.)
Sunday, June 14, 2020.
Yesterday, two of my friends's birthday. We were planning to celebrate in my place. When they came in, I saw they bring 3 cakes which one of them was 12 inch, two of them was 6 inch. I thought that it was too much for us. Because had other friends bring 4 combos of sushi, 2 boxes of macarons, 2 boxes of oreo, 2 boxes of chip, 2 large bottles of drink and we only had 7 peoples. When I finished sushis, I felt my stomach had already seven full. Then we sang the birthday song to celebrate for the birthday boys and girls. I couldn't even eat a whole piece of cake. It was nice, but a little be too sweet for me and macarons as well. Afterward, some of people sang, Some of people watched TV, Some of people were doing yoga. After 4 hours, we all watched movies which a total of 3 movies from 7 pm-12 am. I had never eaten that much before. Even though it was crazy for me, It was still a nice day. I hope everything goes well.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 1
1
18) Keep a diary (Sunday, June 15, 2020.)
CORRECTION
Yesterday was two of my friends' birthday. (Since you are writing about more than 1 friend, the apostrophe goes after the "s," not before "s,." (OR) Two of my friends' birthday was yesterday. We were planning to celebrate at my place. ("at" is used for location. Your place is a location) ("in" and "at" are prepositions) (connecting words). When they came in, I saw they brought 3 cakes) (bring as you use it here is future tense) (brought is past tense: something they have with them used here should be the past tense form). The period goes after cakes. New sentence: One of them was 12 inches. ("es" is needed at the end of inch since 12 is greater than 1, which turns "inch" to the plural form). Two of them were 6 inches.(You are making good progress!! I don't want to overwhelm you. SO I WILL CORRECT MORE LATER.
Sunday, June 14, 2020.
Yesterday, two of my friends's birthday. We were planning to celebrate in my place. When they came in, I saw they bring 3 cakes which one of them was 12 inch, two of them was 6 inch. I thought that it was too much for us. Because had other friends bring 4 combos of sushi, 2 boxes of macarons, 2 boxes of oreo, 2 boxes of chip, 2 large bottles of drink and we only had 7 peoples. When I finished sushis, I felt my stomach had already seven full. Then we sang the birthday song to celebrate for the birthday boys and girls. I couldn't even eat a whole piece of cake. It was nice, but a little be too sweet for me and macarons as well. Afterward, some of people sang, Some of people watched TV, Some of people were doing yoga. After 4 hours, we all watched movies which a total of 3 movies from 7 pm-12 am. I had never eaten that much before. Even though it was crazy for me, It was still a nice day. I hope everything goes well.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
