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Composition of NCE Lesson 19 2020.6.16 In a bar one night, Mr. Brand was talking to a workman who told him that the woman sat on the couch, Mrs. Ramsay had Possessed a good deal of fortune. The workman added that Mrs. Ramsay had lived together with her cat in a flat and would often stay at home with her precious pet. Everyday Mr. Brand stood outside Mrs. Ramsay's and was always observing the cat, as the cat usually left and came back the flat at the same time, Mr. Brand found that it had regular habits. He also found out as much as he could about Mrs. Ramsay and leant that the cat meant a lot to her and she would wiling to pay a considerable ransom if the cat was kidnaped. One evening, as the cat was leaving the block of flats Mr. Brand was waiting in a corner and all of sudden pounced on the cat. The cat turned out to be caught in a cage. He took the cat to his underground garage and kept it 'safe'. During the next three days, he walked past Mrs. Ramsay's flat on several occasions and noticed that she got very anxious about the cat's disappearance. Now that he was sure the plan was going to succeed so he wrote a letter in which included all his demands.

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Composition of NCE Lesson 19 2020.6.16

In a bar one night, Mr. Brand was talking to a workman who told him that the woman sat on the couch, Mrs. Ramsay, was possessed of a great fortune. The workman added that Mrs. Ramsay lived together with her cat in a flat and would often stay at home with her precious pet. Everyday Mr. Brand stood outside Mrs. Ramsay's and was always observing the cat. As the cat usually left and came back to the flat at the same time, Mr. Brand found that it had regular habits. He also found out as much as he could about Mrs. Ramsay and learnt that the cat meant a lot to her and she would be willing to pay a considerable ransom if the cat was catnapped.
One evening, as the cat was leaving the block of flats, Mr. Brand was waiting in a corner and all of sudden pounced on the cat and caught it in a cage. He took the cat to his underground garage and kept it 'safe'. During the next three days, he walked past Mrs. Ramsay's flat on several occasions and noticed that she was very anxious about the cat's disappearance. Now that he was sure the plan was going to succeed he wrote a letter in which he included all his demands.
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