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About myself. I need to make a story about myself for my work. I would be glad if you could help me correct my mistakes. Hello everybody! My name is Anastasia and I would like to tell you a little about myself. I am 20 years old and study at the Department of culture at Saint Petersburg state University. I like to dance and sing. I took modern dance lessons when I was a teenager. Now I'm doing stretching. As for vocals, I didn't do vocals professionally, but I do it well, at least people say I sing well. Also my hobby is handicraft especially scrapbooking. I lI love printed photos and making photo albums. As for my work experience. I had been working in the regional children's camp for two camp sessions and in the Russian Children’s Centre Orlyonok for three camp sessions. I am also a volunteer of organization Movement is life We organize various events for children with disabilities such as workshops, festivals and so on . I would like to work in your camp because I love children and the camp atmosphere very much .I was happy to work as a tutor, but now I would like to try to work in a new field, come up with activities and entertainment for children, see the life of the camp on the other hand. I know what it's like to work in a camp, rehearsing until the morning and having sleepless nights. I understand that camp is a vacation for children, not for you. And I really want to make vacation for children unforgettable.

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About myself.

I need to make a story about myself for my work. I would be glad if you could help me correct my mistakes.
Hello everybody! My name is Anastasia and I would like to tell you a little about myself. I am 20 years old and study at the Department of Culture at Saint Petersburg State University. I like to dance and sing. I took modern dance lessons when I was a teenager. Now I'm doing stretching. As for vocals, I didn't do vocals professionally, but I do it well, and at least people say I sing well. Also, my hobby is handicraft, especially scrapbooking. I lI love printed photos and making photo albums. As for my work experience. I had been working have worked in the regional children's camp for two camp sessions and in the Russian Children’s Centre Orlyonok for three camp sessions. I am also a volunteer of for the organization Movement Is Life. We organize various events for children with disabilities such as workshops, festivals, and so on .
I would like to work in your camp because I love children and the camp atmosphere very much. I was happy to work as a tutor, but now I would like to try to work in a new field, where I can come up with activities and entertainment for children, as well as see the life of the camp on the other hand. I know what it's like to work in a camp, rehearsing until the morning and having sleepless nights. I understand that camp is a vacation for children, not for you. And I really want to make vacation for children unforgettable.

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