If I can choice?
If I can choice?
The dream that I can do anything for my happiness.
The life that I can live even if I don't know the result.
Cruel... I though she is my whole. life but That is just dream.
However, If I can live without knowing the truth, I might be happy
'What is happiness to you?'
-After watching movie -Vanilla Sky
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If I can choice choose? (using 'can' makes it seem more possible, using 'could' makes it sound more like wondering.)
If I can choice?
The dream that I can do anything for my happiness.
The life that I can live, even if I don't know the result.
Cruel... I thought she is was my whole life, but that is was just a dream.
However, if I can live without knowing the truth, I might be happy
'What is happiness to you?'
-After watching movie -Vanilla Sky
Nice poem. I also liked Vanilla Sky.
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