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1、Nothing can grab attention of parents than their kid’s school performance. More and more companies forcing on extracurricular class to help students increase their scores have taken off , accompanied by the single social valuation system .The thought one is a loser if one isn’t able to enter a prestigious university and finds a high-pay job is taken root in this young generation.
2、In one sense, despite years of efforts to learn English, one can’t master this language without a immersion environment.
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Sentence practice
1. Nothing grabs the attention of parents as much as their kid’s school performance. More and more companies forcing extracurricular classes to help students increase their scores have taken off, accompanied by the single social valuation system .The thought that one is a loser if one isn’t able to enter a prestigious university and find a high-paying job has taken root in this young generation.
2. In one sense, despite years of effort to learn English, one can’t master this language without an immersive environment.
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1、Nothing can grab the attention of parents more than their kid’s school performance. More and more companies providing extracurricular help to boost students' test scores have taken off, accompanied by the single social valuation system. (This sentence is correct, I'm just not sure what the "social value system" means) The idea that one is a loser if one isn’t able to enter a prestigious university and find a high-paying job has taken root in this young generation.
2、Despite years of efforts to learn English, one can’t master this language without an immersion environment.
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