Saturday, June 14, 2020 - A Hiking Tour in Wulai
Yesterday we joined a guided hiking tour in Wulai, which is a small town in New Taipei City and famous for its hot springs and aboriginal culture. I have been to Wulai for several times, but I never really liked it because of the messy street view and ugly shop signs. However, this time we went farther into the mountainous area, and I found the scenery is beautiful. The hiking trail was built alongside the stream, so we can hear the sound of the flowing water during the whole trip. Our nature-loving, enthusiastic tour guides gave us detailed explanations of the plants and insects we met on the way. We also saw several waterfalls coming down from the cliffside. I really enjoy being surrounded by the nature, and wish I could visit it again soon.
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Saturday, June 14, 2020 - A Hiking Tour in Wulai
Yesterday we joined a guided hiking tour in Wulai, which is a small town in New Taipei City, famous for its hot springs and aboriginal culture. I have been to Wulai several times, but I never really liked it because of the messy street view and ugly shop signs. However, this time we went farther into the mountainous area, and I found the scenery beautiful. The hiking trail was built alongside the stream, so we could hear the sound of the flowing water during the whole trip. Our nature-loving, enthusiastic tour guides gave us detailed explanations of the plants and insects we saw on the way. We also saw several waterfalls coming down from the cliffside. I really enjoyed being surrounded by the nature, and wish I could visit it again soon.
Great work! You used a lot of detail, with many reasons why you enjoyed the visit. I updated a couple of verbs to the past tense so they agreed with the tense of the rest of the paragraph. (Note as well "I have been to Wulai several times" vs. "for several times".) I hope you can plan another trip later this year!
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