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Interruption of the Meeting I had a meeting with the sales engineers of a vision sensor maker in the lunchroom of my company today. After about thirty minutes the meeting started, some workers came into the room. I noticed at last that there was about to start a monthly meeting about the orders received and the shipment value, which should be kept secret from outsiders. So I apologized for the interruption of the meeting and rushed the sales engineers to leave the room. I was very upset. 打ち合わせの突然の中断 今日、画像センサーメーカーの技術営業と会社の食堂で打ち合わせをした。打ち合わせ開始から約30分後、何人かの社員が食堂に集まってきた。しばらくして私は受注額・出荷額についての月例会議が始まろうとしていることにようやく気づいた。だから、私は打ち合わせの中断を詫びて、早く部屋から退出するように急かせた。ほんとうに焦った。

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Interruption of the Meeting

I had a meeting with the sales engineers of a vision sensor maker in the lunchroom of my company today. After About thirty minutes after the meeting started, some workers came into the room. I noticed at last that there was, about to start, a monthly meeting [1] about the orders received and the shipment values, which should be kept secret from outsiders. So I apologized for the interruption of the meeting and rushed the sales engineers to leave the room. I was very upset.
打ち合わせの突然の中断
今日、画像センサーメーカーの技術営業と会社の食堂で打ち合わせをした。打ち合わせ開始から約30分後、何人かの社員が食堂に集まってきた。しばらくして私は受注額・出荷額についての月例会議が始まろうとしていることにようやく気づいた。だから、私は打ち合わせの中断を詫びて、早く部屋から退出するように急かせた。ほんとうに焦った。

  1. More natural: "there was a monthly meeting about to start on orders received... {"meeting about" is fine, but because "about" is used twice, it sounds better to use a different preposition that would serve a similar function, like "meeting on (a topic)".
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