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In the UAE, the weather, from April until October is incredibly humid and boiling hot. Heatwaves are also quite common during these months. Towards the end of October, the temperature goes down. There’s a gentle breeze and it occasionally showers. The weather is very pleasant throughout these months; people usually hit the beach and children spend most of their time playing outdoors.
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Can you proofread and help my text sound more natural?
In the UAE, the weather, from April until October is incredibly humid and boiling hot. Heatwaves are also quite common during these months. Towards the end of October, the temperature goes down. There’s a gentle breeze and it with occasionally showers. The weather is very pleasant throughout these months (which months? you've only named the hot ones, and we don't know what happens November-March, if it stays pleasant or turns into something else); people usually hit the beach and children spend most of their time playing outdoors.
How would you distinguish "heatwaves" from what is already "incredibly humid and boiling hot"? Does it get even hotter than what already sounds like a heatwave? You could add some temperatures for specifics; how much hotter is a heatwave? How much cooler does it get at the end of October?
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In the UAE, the weather from April until October is incredibly humid and boiling hot. Heatwaves are also quite common during these months. Towards the end of October, however, the temperature goes down drops / decreases. There’s a gentle breeze and it occasionally showers. The weather is very pleasant throughout these months; people usually hit the beach and children spend most of their time playing outdoors.
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