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Hello, My name is Oscar, I live alone in the house, sometimes i have visits like my brothers or parents. Actually I think that this Covid-19 was like wake up from dream. Now, i wake up with alarm clock, I do exercises every day, i run around in backyard for 30 minutes. I prepair breakfast, lunch and dinner. Often the business ask me like make/do(?) a e-commerce but they want to see fast results and not function so. Today for example a business man tell me that he wants to work with me and he wants to win two time more regard last year. i think that dont have sense my text but only i wanted to write some.
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Hola Oscar - es muy bien escribir solamente para praticar. No voy a repetir los correcciones que Anthony (que son muy buenos) pero voy a señalar uno o dos otras cosas que pueden ser útiles para ti.
- "Actually" significa realmente. Utilizamos la palabra cuando hablamos de algo que parece de una manera pero que es en realidad de otra manera. Par ejemplo "He seems very intelligent but he is actually very stupid"
- "Actualmente" significa at the moment
- Si quieres decir que has cambiado tu vida por el Covid diríamos mejor en inglés "Covid'19 was a wake-up call". Esto significa que te diste cuento de la necesidad de cambiar tu vida gracias al coronavirus.
Hello, My name is Oscar, I live alone in the house, sometimes i have visits like my brothers or parents. Actually I think that this Covid-19 was like wake up from dream. Now, i wake up with alarm clock, I do exercises every day, i run around in backyard for 30 minutes. I prepair breakfast, lunch and dinner. Often the business ask me like make/do(?) a e-commerce but they want to see fast results and not function so. Today for example a business man tell me that he wants to work with me and he wants to win two time more regard last year. i think that dont have sense my text my text does not make sense but only i wanted to write some.
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Hi world! .. Correct me, thank you
i write
Hello, My name is Oscar. I live alone in the house. sometimes i have visits visitors, like my brothers or parents. Actually, I think that this Covid-19 was like wake waking up from a dream. Now, i wake up with an alarm clock. I do exercises every day. I run around in the backyard for 30 minutes. I prepair prepare breakfast, lunch and dinner. Often, the business business people ask me like make/do(?) to do a e-commerce but and they want to see fast results and but not function so it does not work that way. Today for example, a business man tell told me that he wants to work with me and he wants to win gain two times more regard than last year. i think that dont have sense my text but only i wanted to write some.
=)
¡Bien hecho!
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