My hurt back
Hello everyone, today I am writing about my hurt back, today my back is very hurt. I don’t know why it is hurt. I will very angry when my back is hurt. In this afternoon, we go to play, they will play very happy but i will not. Because it back is so hurt and I can’t run and punch back for my self. In the evening, when people will very happy and I will sad. I can’t sit beacause it so hurt. But now I feel better because my young sister and my mother will help me to punch my back. It not hurt again and now I can feel happy again. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
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My hurt backache
Hello everyone, today I am writing about my hurt back, today my back is very hurt. I don’t know why it is hurt. I will very angry when my back is hurt. In this afternoon, we go to play, they will play very happy but i will not. Because it back is so hurt and I can’t run and punch back for my self. In the evening, when people will very happy and I will sad. I can’t sit beacause it so hurt. But now I feel better because my young sister and my mother will help me to punch my back. It not hurt again and now I can feel happy again. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
Hello everyone. Today I am writing about my backache, it is very painful. I don't know why it hurts and it makes me angry. This afternoon when we go outside to play, everyone will be happy, but I will not. My back is so sore that I can't run and defend myself. Tonight, when everyone is happy, I will be sad. I cannot sit because my back is so sore/painful. I am feeling a little better because my sister and mother massaged my back. It feels better and I am happy again. Thank you very much for reading my posts and correcting them everyday. Goodbye and goodnight everyone.
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Hi there Le Phuong! You would say "my back hurts" or "I have a pain in my back". Well done :)
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