My car
I have a car that is old but comfortable. When I was young, I didn't expect that I would have a car. At that time, I thought I can live my life without having a car because there are many comfortable public transportations in my country and city. Particularly, I liked to take the subway the most. Subway brings back my memories of when I was a college student. Sounds of trains, voices of an announcement, and cool and warm air. What I remember the most is a feeling of spring and autumn. They smell so sweet and fresh. It's been a while since I smell these seasons in the subway because I drive a car rather than taking the subway. Even though now is way more convenient, I sometimes miss the time when I had to take the subway.
*Please correct my sentences in a natural way. Thanks in advance!
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My car
I have a car that is old but comfortable. When I was young, I didn't expect that I would have a car. At that time, I thought I can could live my life without having a car because there are many is comfortable public transportations in my country and city. Particularly, I liked to take the subway the most. The S subway brings back my memories of when I was a college student. Sounds of trains, voices of an announcement, and cool and warm air. What I remember the most is a feeling of spring and autumn. They smell so sweet and fresh. It's been a while since I smelled these seasons in the subway because I drive a car rather than take ing the subway. Even though now is way more convenient, I sometimes miss the time when I had to take the subway.
*Please correct my sentences in a natural way. Thanks in advance!
Note: "Public transportation" can refer to all kinds at once (trains, subways, buses, etc) - you don't need to make it plural.
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