Could you correct my English? I am studying TOEFL ibt. I am glad if you correct my English. It is more important to keep your old frinends than making new friends. I think it is more important to make new friends First, it gives us good mental affection. Some people don't like to make friends because they are shy or nervous when they meet strang people. It is a natural thing and I also feel like that at first. But one day I realize that making new friends may have some positive point so I shouldn't avoid chances to meet new people. One of my friends, who was not my friend 2 years ago, is very active and take action which she is interested in as soon as possible, I envy her because I am worried about many things when I start something new. However her action make me more active. I become more positive person. Her passion chenge my mind better. I appreciate the day when we become friends. Second, it may lead to increase salary in the future. For example when you move to or join the new company, you have to introducce yourself in the front of everyone who you don't know. At the lunch time you don't know any friends who heva lunch with. Then if you try to make new friends and good relationships, you have an oppotunity to talk to senior guys.They hava lights to judge your performamce and decide your money. Because you and your boss are good friends, you may get more money. That is why what is important thing is making new friends.