Hi, could you correct these sentences, please?
1) The chain on the chainsaw was too loose so I had to tighten it.
2) He tried to set me up but my boss uphold me and didn't issue me any fines.
3) The weather was too severe so no one wanted to venture out.
4) He submitted strong evidence that the producing of this soap must be ceased because of potential ecological problems.
5) He felt an authentic joy watching how other people rejoice about his presents.
6) If you hadn't made a campfire, we wouldn't have set the whole forest on fire.
7) He's similar to his father but unlike him, his father has a huge dignity.
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1) The chain on the chainsaw was too loose so I had to tighten it.
2) He tried to set me up but my boss uphold supported me and didn't issue me any fines.
It would be more common, and a little clearer, to see something like: "He tried to set me up but my boss knew that I was innocent, so my boss didn't issue me any fines."
3) The weather was too severe so no one wanted to venture out outside.
4) He submitted strong evidence that the producing production of this soap must be ceased because of the potential ecological problems.
5) He felt an authentic joy watching how other people rejoice about his presents.
This makes sense as is, but check your spelling to be sure. There are two words that are pronounced the same but have different meanings. Presents means gifts. Presence is different and is talking about the person's attendance or existence at a location.
6) If you hadn't made a campfire, we wouldn't have set the whole forest on fire.
7) He's similar to his father but unlike him, his father has a huge great dignity, unlike him.
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Hi, could you correct these sentences, please?
1) The chain on the chainsaw was too loose so I had to tighten it.
2) He tried to set me up but my boss uphold supported me and didn't issue me any fines.
3) The weather was too severe so no one wanted to venture out.
4) He submitted strong evidence that the producing ( "production" sounds better) of this soap must be ceased because of potential ecological problems.
5) He felt an authentic joy watching how other people rejoice about his presents. (<--- Do you want the word "presence"? Same sound, different meaning)
6) If you hadn't made a campfire, we wouldn't have set the whole forest on fire.
7) He's similar to his father but unlike him, his father has a huge ("much more" or "a lot of") dignity.
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