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The convergence study of the first four natural frequencies of a Timoshenko shaft is presented in Tables 3 and 4. In this case, the shaft is in the stationary state, it is not subjected to any axial force and it is diskless. The results of the dimensionless frequency parameter obtained by using the differential transform method are validated with those obtained by Kocatürk and Şimşek [24] for the configuration of a simply supported shaft which is tabulated in Table 4. The dimensionless frequency parameter used in this case and the cases that come after in this study is given by the following expression:XXXXXXXXX
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Hi can anyone correct this passage?
The convergence study of the first four natural frequencies of a Timoshenko shaft is presented in Tables 3 and 4. In this case, the shaft is in the stationary state, it is not subjected to any axial force and it is diskless. The results of the dimensionless frequency parameter obtained by using the differential transform method are validated with* those obtained by Kocatürk and Şimşek [24] for the configuration of a simply supported shaft which is tabulated in Table 4. The dimensionless frequency parameter used in this case and the cases that come after the subsequent cases in this study is given by the following expression:XXXXXXXXX
* "validated against" is better, assuming you mean your results were checked against the other data. You can also say "X was validated by Y" but that suggests Y deliberately replicated the experiment to repeat X.
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