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An attempt to hone usage of some phrasal verbs through an artificial message. (There is no truth) What could you say in order to improve an artificial text below? When I started working at the company we branched out our product line. Unfortunately, a few product lines closed down because we didn't have enough resources to carry on development and maintenance. The former management had admitted their mistakes and stood down. We had noted down all results of closed projects and analyzed them in order to work out a new strategy of the company. We look forward to utilising those bits of knowledge to take up most of the market. Particularly in our field, weighing up new technologies and applying them in the development of our products, which we hope to take off in the next year. Hopefully, we will break into the next year with the best products to sell. Thanks.

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An attempt to hone usage of some phrasal verbs through an artificial message. (There is no truth in it at all)

What could you say in order to improve the artificial texts below?

When I started working at the company we branched out our product line. Unfortunately, a few product lines closed down because we lacked resources to carry on development and maintenance. The former management admitted their mistakes and stood down. We noted down all the results of closed projects and analyzed them in order to work out a new strategy for the company. We look forward to utilising these bits of knowledge to take up most of the market. Particularly in our field, weighing up new technologies and applying them developing our products, we hope to take off next year. Hopefully, we will break into the new year with the best products to sell.

Thanks.

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