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Angry thing My mom send one of my kittens away, however she insisted that someone has stolen her. She always likes playing such lying tricks on us, she was so good at it! But we not children anymore, she still makes lies, she would prefer to make a whole complete story then describe it as colorful detailed as possible, then adding some emotions into it. What a adult thing! She told me, this morning a little girl came to our family while I was doing my homework, she really likes that kitten, and wants to own it. Of course she wouldn’t agree with that, she said that we don’t allow her to send them away. However, she loves that kitten so much, and take it without permission, my mom she was so angry and run for a long distance to chase them back, however, she doesn’t know who they are and where they are from. What a lie! My mom maybe think that all of her children don’t have brain in the head. She was so good.

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Angry thing (Something that made me angry; or; Aggravating thing, something aggravating)

My mom send sent one of my kittens away, however she insisted that someone has stolen her.
She always likes playing such lying tricks on us, and she was is so good at it! But we not children anymore, she still makes lies, she would prefer to make up a whole complete story then describe it with as much colorful detailed detail as possible, then adding some emotions into it. What a adult thing! (I don't understand what you mean by this. Maybe "What a childish thing!" ?)
She told me that this morning a little girl came to our family while I was doing my homework, she told her she really likes that kitten, and wants to own it. Of course she wouldn’t agree with that, she said that we don’t wouldn't allow her to send them it away. However, she loves loved that kitten so much, and take she took it without permission, my mom she was so angry and run ran for a long distance to chase them back, however, she doesn’t know who they are and where they are from.
What a lie! My mom maybe thinks that all of her children don’t have brain in the head.
She was so good (at what? lying?)

Good job, just a few errors but your meaning is clear. Interesting story. Keep it up!

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