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I am writing a report, could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please? 1.Introduction Our lives changed due to the coronavirus which spread rapidly across five continents and forced us to maintain a social distance. This report aims to show what has been going on since the beginning of the pandemic: how it began and how it has been evolving. What we can learn from the experience and some recommendations. The information was obtained through interviews, videos, reports, newspapers online, articles and the official website of the WHO. 1.1 How Covid- 19 began The epicenter of the COVID-19 outbreak was in a wet market located in Wuhan, China on 31th December 2019. According to the World Health Organization (WHO) the virus was declared a pandemic on 11 March. This happen when an infectious disease is passing easily from person to person around of the world. 1.2 Evolution This is a facing a global health crisis the coronavirus has become the fifth documented pandemic since the 1918 flu pandemic While on the Asian continent they are stopping the pandemic.The rest of the world are just now entering the whirlwind of infections. However, the governments around the world have declared phase three of the contingency in many countries. Thus, are looking for exit strategies they increased the measures to halt the spread of the virus by suspending non essential activities in the public and private sectors reinforcing the call for social distancing. 1.3 Learning It is considered that everyone learns to be more disciplined. This is of vital importance in life especially during this pandemic since being undisciplined and not following hygiene measures can lead us to contract the virus. In addition, it is learned to use technology to communicate with our loved ones. 2. Conclusion Everyone is living a critical moment at a global level and this pandemic is leaving a strong impact on our lives. By staying at home, to have not only learned to follow hygiene measures but also to value our time doing different activities. Also, are spending more time living with our families, taking care of each other day by day. In this way, we prevent the pandemic from spreading. 3. Recommendations It is recommended to everyone to continue implementing the hygiene measures correctly and to apply everything to have learned in this pandemic to the future because it is not the only infectious disease that surrounds us. All the governments believe that as a society we can to help improve the situation by staying at home. Going out only for the essentials because b

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I am writing a report, could you help me with my grammar and punctuation please?

1.Introduction
Our lives changed due to the coronavirus which spread rapidly across five continents and forced us to maintain a social distance. This report aims to show what has been going on since the beginning of the pandemic: how it began and how it has been evolving, what we can learn from the experience, and some recommendations. The information was obtained through interviews, videos, reports, online newspapers, articles and the official website of the WHO.
1.1 How Covid-19 began
The epicenter of the COVID-19 outbreak was in a wet market located in Wuhan, China on December 31st, 2019. According to the World Health Organization (WHO) the virus was declared a pandemic on March 11th. This happens when an infectious disease is passing easily from person to person around of the world.
1.2 Evolution
This is a global health crisis; the coronavirus has become the fifth documented pandemic since the 1918 flu pandemic. While on the Asian continent they are stopping the pandemic, the rest of the world are just now entering the whirlwind of infections.
However, the governments around the world have declared phase three of the contingency in many countries. Thus, they are looking for exit strategies and increased the measures to halt the spread of the virus by suspending non-essential activities in the public and private sectors, reinforcing the call for social distancing.
1.3 Learning
It is considered that everyone learns to be more disciplined. This is of vital importance in life, especially during this pandemic, since being undisciplined and not following hygiene measures can lead us to contract the virus. In addition, it is learned to use technology to communicate with our loved ones.


2. Conclusion
Everyone is living in a critical moment at a global level and this pandemic is leaving a strong impact on our lives. By staying at home, we have not only learned to follow hygiene measures but also to value our time doing different activities. Also, we are spending more time living with our families, taking care of each other day by day. In this way, we prevent the pandemic from spreading.
3. Recommendations
It is recommended to everyone to continue implementing the hygiene measures correctly and to apply everything we have learned in this pandemic to the future because it is not the only infectious disease that surrounds us.
All the governments believe that as a society we can help to improve the situation by staying at home. Going out only for the essentials because....
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