Could you correct me? It's first time I use this function)
I like looking at the sky and regarding the stars. It's kind of pleasure. Sometimes I found beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I will see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in the village where were no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen the shooting star? I saw and I saw more than just one. Once I had a chance to see starfall. It was amazing! Thousands of stars are in the sky like someone scattered countless amount of sand grains in dark space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my note. Thank you very much))
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Could you correct me? It's first time I use this function)
I like looking at the sky and regarding {or: gazing at} the stars. It's kind of a pleasure. Sometimes, I found find beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I will see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in the village where were are no big buildings [1] or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen the a [2] shooting star? I saw have, and I saw have seen it more than just once. [3] Once, I had a chance to see starfall {better: falling star}. It was amazing! Thousands of stars are in the sky like as though someone scattered countless amounts of sand grains in a dark space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my note {better: composition}. Thank you very much.))
- Or: "There aren't any..."
- There's more than one instance of a shooting star phenomenon, so "a".
- I believe you saw the phenomenon on more than one occasion, so "more than once". "More than one" would imply that multiple shooting star phenomena were happening at the same time.
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Could you correct me? It's my first time using this function)
I like looking at the sky and regarding the stars. It's kind of pleasurable. Sometimes I find beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I will see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in villages where there are no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen a shooting star? I’ve seen more than just one. Once, I had a chance to see a star fall. It was amazing! Thousands of stars are in the sky like someone scattered countless amounts of sand grains in a/the dark space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my note. Thank you very much))
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I like looking at the night sky and seeing the stars. Sometimes, I find beauty and obscurity in it. When I look at the sky for a long time, I can see the Milky Way. Of course, it is only possible in the village where there are no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen a shooting star? I've more than just one. Once I had a chance to see a meteor shower. It was amazing! There are thousands of stars in the sky like someone scattered countless grains of sand in dark sky.
Thank you very much for reading and correcting my note.
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It’s a kind of pleasure
Sometimes i find beauty
Where are no big buildings
I’ve seen and I’ve seen
Thousands of stars were
In a dark
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Could you correct me? It's first time I use this function)
I like looking at the sky and watching the stars. It's a kind of pleasure. Sometimes I find beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I will see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in the village with no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen a shooting star? I have and I saw more than just one. Once I had a chance to see a shower of them. It was amazing! Thousands of stars light the sky like someone scattered countless grains of sand in darkest space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my note. Thank you very much))
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