My favorite artist
I love music and my favorite artist is Fernando Delgadillo, he's a very well composer of music, so I have all the records that he makes.
Once I went to one of his concert and I was sitting between my brother and my friend. When the concert finished I was very close of him and I could take us a photo together.
I would like to buy all his records, so I have to work a lot.
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My favorite artist
I love music and my favorite artist is Fernando Delgadillo. He's a very well composer of music,(This sentence is a little confusing, you could say: he composes music very well, or he's a very good composer.) so I have all the records that he makes.
Once I went, (another way to say this would be I once went ...), to one of his concert and I was sitting between my brother and my friend. When the concert finished I was very close of him and I could take us a photo together.
I would like to buy all his records, so I have to work a lot.
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My favorite artist
I love music and my favorite artist is Fernando Delgadillo. He is a very good composer of music and I have all the records that he made.
Once I went to one of his concerts and I was sitting between my brother and my friend. When the concert finished, I was very close to him and I was able to take us a photo of us together.
I would like to buy all his records, so I have to work a lot.
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