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please help me correct it Hi i've made a brief note about dream house . please help me know my mistakes . ----- My dream house would be situated on a special place between jungle and beach . It would be like a enormous cabin with full of fragrance wood and dead flowers in there besides huge living rooms an couples of bed room for guests. I would prefer to decorate it with antique things . the point is I wouldn't be in charge of cooking or cleaning because there would be responsible and faithful servants to do that. I would have a fabulous bookcase in my bedroom , with profuse English books and candlelit table whilst I would be reading I would hear the voice of outdoor like waves movement and not any thing else . my room would be overlooking the see . in this fascinating house I would have best English tutores and at me- time I would turn on my home theater system and watch friends series with its cast and we would have fun with joey's ancestor's food " pizza " for our supper … somebody should give me a nudge !

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My dream house would be situated in a special place between jungle and beach. It would be like an enormous cabin full of fragrance wood and dead flowers in there besides huge living rooms a couple of bedrooms for guests. I would prefer to decorate it with antique things . the point is I wouldn't be in charge of cooking or cleaning because there would be responsible and faithful servants to do that. I would have a fabulous bookcase in my bedroom, with profuse English books and candlelit table whilst I would be reading I would hear the voice of outdoor like waves movement and not anything else . my room would be overlooking the see . in this fascinating house I would have best English tutors and at me- time I would turn on my home theater system and watch friends series with its cast and we would have fun with joey's ancestor's food " pizza " for our supper … somebody should give me a nudge!
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My dream house would be situated on in a special place between the/a jungle and the/a beach . It would be like an enormous cabin with full of fragrance, wood and dead flowers, in there besides with huge living rooms and a couples of bed rooms for guests. I would prefer to decorate it with antique things. The point is… I wouldn't be in charge of cooking or cleaning because there would be responsible and faithful servants to do that. I would have a fabulous bookcase in my bedroom , filled with profuse English books, and a candlelit table whilst where I would be reading read. I would hear the voice sounds coming from outside of outdoor like gently breaking waves movement and nothing any thing else . My room would be overlooking the sea . In this fascinating house I would have the best English tutors and at for some me-time (or, to treat myself, after an exhausting day of reading fine English literature and listening to the rolling waves of the ocean )I would turn on my home theater system and watch Friends series with its cast and we would have fun with joey's ancestors’ food " pizza " for our supper … somebody should give me a nudge !


Great job Ghazal! Your dream house sounds awesome! Books, ocean waves and pizza is a great combo. Good job! Let me know if you've got any questions.

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