My team members
I went out to discuss the report with my team members today. I left home at ten to nine, so l could catch the bus at 9:00. We met at the cafeteria near the intersection. They are the team members of the class that is about knowing yourself. One of them is a kind men who likes serving others in difficulty. And the other members is a rational men who doesn’t see whether people’s action is wrong, he always wants to know what result in these action. l learned a lot from them.
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I don't know you're level but this is very good!! Here's some corrections for the harder sentences:
They are the team members of the class that is about knowing yourself. = They are the team members of the class that teaches getting to know yourself. OR They are the team members of the class that deals with self knowledge and gaining a deeper understanding of yourself/oneself.
One of them is a kind men who likes serving others… = One of them is a kind man who likes helping others…
serving others in difficulty - this is an uncommon expression but not wrong. Depending on the situation, it might be better to say = helping/serving people in need
And the other members is a rational men = and the other member is a rational man
who doesn’t see whether people’s action is wrong, he always wants to know what result in these action. = who is not interested in whether people’s actions are wrong, he is more interested in the results of those actions.
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