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When I lived in Aguascalientes my friends and my family used to go fishing road, we would go to the river weekly, those afternoons were very fun because we used to tell stories and sometimes, we would go camping in a very big tent, I think we should have those adventures other time.
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When I lived in Aguascalientes, my friends and my family used to go fishing and road we would go to the river weekly. Those afternoons were very so much fun because we used to tell stories and sometimes, we would go camping in a very big tent. I think we should have those adventures in another time.
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When I lived in Aguascalientes, my friends and my family used to go fishing. road, (I'm not sure what you meant by "road" here, but it isn't needed in this sentence).
We would go to the river weekly; those afternoons were very fun because we used to tell stories and sometimes, we would go camping in a very big tent.
I think we should have those adventures more often.
Keep an eye on your punctuation; a misplaced comma can change an entire sentence's meaning. But your wording and grammar are fine. :-)
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