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Day 7 Home work I didn't my Home work on English. I needed to presentation about daily routine. I searched new pictures, and I added in my presentation. It took half an hour. Then I wrote text about daily routine in the morning and in the afternoon. I don't finish my Home work. I like drinking tea, when I do my Home work. I usually add honey in my tea. It's so sweet. I know. I don't eat a lot of honey in day, and honey doesn't help to lerning English. I hope, I have time to do my home work yet.

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Day 7 Home work

I didn't finish my Home work on English. I needed to create a presentation about my daily routine. I searched for some new pictures, and I added them in my presentation. It took half an hour. Then I wrote some text about my daily routine in the morning and in the afternoon. I don't didn't finish my Home work. I like drinking tea when I do my Home work. I usually add honey in my tea. It's so sweet. I know. I don't eat a lot of honey in a day, and honey doesn't help to lerning when learning English. I hope that I have time to do my home work yet.

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Notes
  1. You need a verb after "didn't" (to say what you didn't do..) so I added finish.
  2. You need a verb after "I needed to" so I added create; you could also say make, etc.
  3. You need an adjective to qualify "daily routine", so I added my. "About daily routine" would signify the general idea of "daily routine" without saying whose routine it is.
  4. The verb "search" needs the preposition for after it, if you are searching for a specific thing.
  5. "I like drinking tea when I do my Home work" ... no comma here.
  6. You could also say "honey doesn't help you to learn English"
  7. "I hope that ..." The word that could be omitted here, but don't use a comma after "I hope". (I don't know Russian but I believe this is a Russian punctuation convention).
  8. I didn't change it, but "home work" is normally written "homework" - one word.

Best wishes from Bristol, UK
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Day 7 Home work

I didn't do my English homework. I needed to present about a daily routine. I searched for new pictures that I added to my presentation. It took half an hour. Then I wrote a text about my daily routine in the morning and in the afternoon. I haven't finished my Home work. ?? I like drinking tea while I do my homework. I usually add honey in my tea which makes it very sweet. I know. I don't eat a lot of honey during the day, and
I do not think that honey helps me to learn English.??? I hope that I have time to still do my homework yet.

Nice job!
I am not sure about the part about you not eating a lot of honey, so I changed it a little bit. Let me know if you have questions with my corrections or changes. Have a wonderful day!! Michelle :)

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