fishing day
I went fishing with my kid last weekend，just by a nearby pond. we used a large pocket nets to catch fish，no fish came into the nets，only some small shrimps， but my kid liked it a lot. Considering every creature has the right to live，I told my kid not to bring the creatures home ，so we observed them carefully and then let them go back into the nature.
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fishing day
I went fishing with my kid last weekend, just by at a nearby pond. We used a large pocket nets to catch fish，no fish came into the net, only some small shrimps, but my kid liked it a lot. Considering every creature has the right to live，I told my kid not to bring the creatures home, so we observed them carefully and then let them go back into the nature.
The text is well written, just a few small mistakes.
I changed the preposition to "AT". (If you say "BY" it means "CLOSE TO")
Make sure you are consistent with singular and plural - I was not sure if it was one or more than one net :)
As nature is an abstract noun, we don't need to use an article (THE) here.
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Fishing Day
Last weekend, I went fishing with my kid at a nearby pond. We used large pocket nets to catch fish, but no fish came into the nets...only some small shrimp. Despite this, my kid liked it a lot. Considering that every creature has the right to live, I told my kid we shouldn't bring the creatures home. So, after we caught them, we instead observed them carefully and then released them back into nature.
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