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A department store has reopened in areas under the state of emergency Last Thursday, the Japanese government lifted the state of emergency for 39 of the country's 47 prefectures. Urban regions such as Tokyo, Kanagawa, and Osaka are still under the state of emergency. However, a department store has reopened major outlets in Tokyo, Kanagawa, Saitama, and Osaka today. I understand that such a long closure is causing serious damage to their business, but I am afraid that the number of newly reported infections will rapidly increase again. 非常事態宣言継続中の4都府県でデパートが営業再開 先週木曜日、日本政府は47都道府県中39県で非常事態宣言を解除した。東京、神奈川、大阪といった都市部はまだ非常事態宣言の対象だ。しかしながら、東京、神奈川、埼玉、大阪で今日あるデパートの営業が再開された。こんなに長期間の閉店がデパートの経営状態に深刻な打撃を与えていることは理解できるものの、また毎日の新規感染者数が急増するのではないかと心配だ。

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This was well written. I was unable to find any errors or major areas for improvement. The adverb "However" would have been perfect to start the second sentence as well in order to contrast the government order lifting the state of emergency in 39/47 prefectures. However, since you used it in the 3rd sentence it would have been inappropriate to use in the second sentence as well. Only feedback I can give you is good job.

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