Our camping (I hope anybody will read this and correct 🙏)
I've thought a long time to write about. And finally I decide to tell you about our camping (or hiking, I don't know what is right) in the mountains which is called as Ukrainian Carpathians. It was last summer. There were six of us. At first we bought the tickets on the train. It took us twelve hours to get there from Kyiv (we live in the capital of Ukraine 🇺🇦). When we had arrived to the train station, we at once went to the cafe and then to the shop in order to buy some wine.
All of us had the big backpack, it full of warm clothes, food, extra shoes (when one pair would get wet from the rain), toothbrush and all the toiletries, a steel cup, personal cutlery and others necessary little things.
We found a "taxi" that took us to the starting point of our trip. And we began our route.
At the first day we I felt well, I had so much power. Towards the evening we riched the place to sleep. There boys set up the tents, made a fire and then my friend and I started to cook supper (during the day we had some snacks such as bananas, nuts, dried fruit and sandwiches 🥪).
For supper we had buckwheat with canned meat which were been cooked on fire. At 12 p.m. began heavy rain, it got cold, we had moved to tent and continued to drink wine and having fun.
When we woke up, our wet clothes and shoes already were being dried on the grass in the sun (one of our friends had got up earlier and did that). And near them already cows 🐮were walking. In the morning we had for breakfast muesli with banana and a lot of condensed milk. This was so tasty, I have remembered that breakfast for a long time. After breakfast we put down the tents and continued our route.
That was the second day. It was a little harder than past one. But we saw better views as we climbed higher. Starry sky on that day was unforgettable, because there were not clouds on the sky. Everything was wonderful, but in the next morning was raining again. And we went all the way to the train station in the heavy rain.
It was very slippery and messy to went down.
Only we were on the train we changed our clothes.
I hope anybody has read this. And finally I want to say that wasn't my first camping 🏕, but that was the most interesting and memorable, because one of the most important part of trip is friends. Camping is easy way to see if your friends are true.
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Our camping (I hope anybody will read this and correct 🙏)
I've thought for a long time what to write about. And finally I decide to tell you about our camping in the mountains which are called the Ukrainian Carpathians. It was last summer. There were six of us. At first we bought the tickets on the train. It took us twelve hours to get there from Kyiv (we live in the capital of Ukraine 🇺🇦). When we had arrived at the train station, we at once went to the cafe and then to the shop in order to buy some wine.
All of us had a big backpack, it was full of warm clothes, food, extra shoes (when one pair would get wet from the rain), toothbrush and all the toiletries, a steel cup, personal cutlery and other necessary little things.
We found a "taxi" that took us to the starting point of our trip. And we began our route.
On the first day I felt well, I had so much power. Towards the evening we reached the place to sleep. The boys set up the tents, made a fire and then my friend and I started to cook supper (during the day we had some snacks such as bananas, nuts, dried fruit and sandwiches 🥪).
For supper we had buckwheat with canned meat which was been cooked on the fire. At 12 p.m. it began to rain heavily rain, it got cold, we had to move to the tent and continued to drink wine and having fun.
When we woke up, our wet clothes and shoes already were being dried on the grass in the sun (one of our friends had got up earlier and did that). And near them already cows 🐮were walking. In the morning we had for breakfast muesli with banana and a lot of condensed milk for breakfast. This was so tasty, I will remember that breakfast for a long time. After breakfast we took down the tents and continued our route.
That was the second day. It was a little harder than the first one. But we saw better views as we climbed higher. The starry sky on that day was unforgettable, because there were no clouds in the sky. Everything was wonderful, but in the next morning was raining again. And we went all the way to the train station in the heavy rain.
It was very slippery and messy to went go down.
We were the only ones Only we were on the train we changed our clothes.
I hope somebody has read this. And finally I want to say that wasn't my first camping trip 🏕, but that was the most interesting and memorable, because one of the most important part of the trip is friends. Camping is easy way to see if your friends are true.
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Our camping trip (I hope anybody somebody will read this and correct 🙏)
I've thought for a long time about what to write about. And finally I have decided to tell you about our camping trip (your hike was part of your camping trip) in the mountains which is are called as the Ukrainian Carpathians. It was last summer. There were six of us. At first we bought the tickets on the train. It took us twelve hours to get there from Kyiv (we live in the capital of Ukraine 🇺🇦). When we had arrived to at the train station, we at once went straight away to the cafe and then to the shop in order to buy some wine.
All of us had the big backpacks, it full of warm clothes, food, extra shoes (when in case one pair would get wet from the rain), toothbrush and all the toiletries, a steel cup, personal cutlery and others necessary little things.
We found a "taxi" that took us to the starting point of our trip. And we began our route.
For supper we had buckwheat with canned meat which we cooked / was cooked were been cooked on the fire. At 12 p.m. it began to heavy rain rain heavily. It got cold, so we had moved to into the tent and continued to drink wine and having have fun.
When we woke up, our wet clothes and shoes had already were being dried dried on the grass in the sun (one of our friends had got gotten up earlier and did that put them there). And near them already cows 🐮were walking. In the morning, for breakfast, we had for breakfast muesli with banana and a lot of condensed milk. This That breakfast was so tasty, I have remembered that breakfast for a long time I can still remember it. After breakfast we put took down the tents and continued our route.
That was the second day. It was a little harder than the past previous / the first one. But we saw better views as we climbed higher. The starry sky on that day was unforgettable, because there were not any / there were no clouds on in the sky. Everything was wonderful, but in the next morning it was raining again. And we went all the way back to the train station in the heavy rain.
It was very slippery and messy to went going back down.
Only when we were on the train did we we changed change our clothes. (More common: We only changed our clothes when we were on the train.)
I hope anybody somebody has read this. And finally I want to say that that wasn't my first camping trip 🏕, but that was the most interesting and memorable, because one of the most important parts of trips are the friends who come with you . Camping is an easy way to see if your friends are true / real / genuine.
Somebody VS anybody:
Somebody: you are talking about a specific person, even if you do not know them.
"There is somebody at the door." "Somebody lives in that house." "I hope somebody has read this."
Anybody: more extreme or desperate.
I was alone in the dark. "Is there anybody there?" I asked. "Can anybody hear me?"
"Has anybody seen my purse?"
The best way to learn the difference is by reading lots of examples.
In case... = if...something bad were to happen
Eg: I will put my jewellery in the safe in case anybody tries to steal it.
Arrived + at + place I arrived at school. I arrived at work. I arrived at the train station.
Put up the tents: like building the tents Take down the tents: like removing the tents
Also: Put up the decorations. Take down the decorations.
Going back = returning
I went back to the hotel (informal) = I returned to the hotel (very formal)
Straight away (informal) = at once (very formal)
On the first day / night / morning, etc. On the second / third, etc.
I've thought / sat / slept, etc. for a long time
That sounds like a lovely trip! Great job! Hope this helps! :)
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Our camping (I hope anybody will read this and correct 🙏)
I've thought a long time about what to write about. And finally I decided to tell you about our camping trip(or hiking, hike. I don't know what is right) in the Carpathian mountains which is called as Ukrainian Carpathians. It was last summer. There were six of us. At first First, we bought the tickets on for the train. It took us twelve hours to get there from Kyiv (we live in the capital of Ukraine 🇺🇦). When we had arrived to at the train station, we at once immediately went to the a cafe and then to the a shop in order to buy some wine.
All of us had the big backpacks it full of warm clothes, food, extra shoes (when one pair would get wet from the rain), toothbrush, and all the our toiletries, a steel cup, personal cutlery, and others necessary little things.
We found a "taxi" that took us to the starting point of our trip. And we began our route.
For supper, we had buckwheat groats with canned meat which were had been cooked on the fire. At 12 p.m. a began heavy rain began, it got cold. We had moved to the tent and continued to drink wine and having have fun.
When we woke up, our wet clothes and shoes were already were being dried drying on the grass in the sun (one of our friends had got up earlier and did that). And near them, already cows 🐮were walking. In the morning we had for breakfast muesli with banana and a lot of condensed milk for breakfast. This was so tasty that I have remembered that breakfast for a long time. After breakfast we put took down the tents and continued our route.
That was the second day. It was a little harder than past one the day before. But, we saw better views as we climbed higher. The starry sky on that day night was unforgettable, because there were not no clouds on in the sky. Everything was wonderful, but in the next morning, it was raining again. And we We went all the way to the train station in the heavy rain.
It was very slippery and messy to went dow,n hike down.
I hope anybody somebody has read this. And finally I want to say that this wasn't my first camping trip 🏕, but, it that was the most interesting and memorable because one of the most important parts of a trip is friends. Camping is an easy way to see if your friends are true.
Great story! You asked about camping or hiking. When you stay overnight, you are camping. If you are walking in the forest, you are hiking. On your trip, you went hiking and camping! I hope this helps!
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Our camping trip(I hope someone will read this and correct it 🙏)
I've thought about what to write for a long time. I've decided to tell you about our camping/hiking trip in the Ukrainian Carpathians mountain range. I went last summer with 5 other people. When we arrived at the train station we went to the cafe, and then to the shop to buy some wine. We bought the train tickets for our journey on the train. It took us twelve hours to get there from our hometown Kyiv (the capital of Ukraine).
All of us had big backpacks, full of warm clothes, food, extra shoes (in case the other pair got wet from the rain), toothbrushes, toiletries, a steel cup, personal cutlery and other necessary little things.
We found a taxi that took us to the starting point of our trip, and we began our route.
On the first day I felt good, I had so much power. In the evning we found somewhere to sleep. The boys set up the tents and made a fire and my friend and I started to cook supper (during the day we had some snacks such as bananas, nuts, dried fruit and sandwiches 🥪).
For supper we had buckwheat with canned meat which were cooked on fire. At 12 p.m. it began to rain heavily and got very cold. We moved to the tent and continued to drink wine and have fun.
When we woke up, our wet clothes and shoes were drying on the grass in the sun, one of our friends had got up earlier and laid them out. After we had woken we noticed several cows in the area around us. We had muesli with banana and a lot of condensed milk for breakfast. This was so tasty, I will remember that breakfast for a long time. After breakfast we put down the tents and continued our route.
The second day was a little harder than the first. However, we climbed higher which meant the views were a lot better. The stars in the sky on that day were unforgettable because there were no clouds in the sky. Everything was wonderful, but the next morning it started raining again. We traveled all the way to the train station in the heavy rain.
It was very slippery and messy as we went down.
Once we were on the train we changed our clothes.
I hope somebody has read this. Finally I want to say that this wasn't my first camping trip, but that this was the most interesting and memorable. This is because one of the most important parts of any trip is your friends. Camping is an easy way to see if your friends are true.
This is really impressive. I hope my corrections help you. I have done what I can. They're a few sentences that I didn't know what you were trying to say. Good luck with the next trip!
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