Title:Law ( need correction! thanks!:) )
The laws is regarded as the regulation imposed on human beings. Although laws play an important role in regulating our behavior, I still believe that strict laws can also restrict human’s freedom.
If no law to regulate human behavior, a country would be in chaos and the economy would collapse. For example, if some people do not obey traffic regulations, traffic accidents will increase and traffic jam will become a problem. If those people who sale fake productions are not punished, consumers will worry to buy productions in internet and the country will suffer economically.
Similarly, moral rules and social regulations are also important to our social stability, if people do not abide them, then the respect and the belief between people will be destroyed. As we can see, people can do something that harmful to others in sometimes, just for their self-interest. For instance, if people betray the trust of their business partners or do not fulfil their promises, they will not work together and social cohesion will be under treat.
However, it is unavoidable that laws restrict private liberty or even restrain social development in sometimes. Such as business laws, which may bring about the shrinkage of business activity, but it also ensure a healthy market environment in the long term. Or such as levy high income tax for high-income citizens, which may lead to those people lose their enthusiasm to create wealth, but it can reduce the gap between the rich and the poor. Maybe it can be useful to promote social progress that the governments release some restriction in some area, and encourage people to innovate.
It is obvious that society will be a mess is no laws or rules to regulate. Even though laws can not allow everyone to act at will, the main purpose of laws is to create a society that people can live harmony.
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Title:Law ( need correction! thanks!:) )
If there were no laws to regulate human behavior, a country would be in chaos and the economy would collapse. For example, if some people do not obey traffic regulations, traffic accidents will increase and traffic jams will become a problem. If those the people who sale sell fake productions counterfeit goods are not punished, consumers will worry be afraid to buy goods (or products) in on the internet and the country will suffer economically.
Similarly, moral rules and social regulations are also important to for our social stability. If people do not abide by them, then people will no longer trust or respect one another. the respect and the belief between people will be destroyed. As we can see, sometimes people can do some things that are harmful to others in sometimes, just for their self-interest. For instance, if people betray the trust of their business partners or do not fulfil their promises, they will not work together and social cohesion will be under threat.
However, it is unavoidable that laws restrict private liberty or even restrain social development in sometimes. Such as Take for example, business laws, which may bring about the shrinkage of a decrease in business activity, but it will also ensure a healthy market environment in the long term. Or such as take for example, levy high a high-levy income tax for high-income earners citizens, which may lead to cause those people to lose their enthusiasm to create wealth, but it can may also reduce the gap between the rich and the poor (= "income inequality"). Maybe it can would be useful to promote social progress so that the governments could release some restrictions in some areas, and encourage people to innovate.
It is obvious that society will would be a mess if there is were no laws or rules to regulate it. Even though laws can not allow everyone to act freely at will, the main purpose of laws is to create a society that in which people can live in harmony.
some + things / people / dogs / cats / pens / rules
Abide by...
There is / there are...
If there was / there were
"trust" : the belief between people
"higher-income earners" : people who earn a lot of money
a society in which people live, a city in which people live, a house in which people live, etc.
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Title:Law ( need correction! thanks!:) )
The law is regarded as the regulation imposed on human beings. Although laws play an important role in regulating our behavior, I still believe that strict laws can also restrict human’s freedom.
If there are no laws to regulate human behavior, a country would be in chaos and the economy would collapse. For example, if some people do not obey traffic regulations, traffic accidents will increase and traffic jams will become a problem. If those people who sell fake products are not punished, consumers will worry to buy products on the internet and the country will suffer economically.
Similarly, moral rules and social regulations are also important to our social stability, if people do not abide by them, then the respect and the belief between people will be destroyed. As we can see, people can do something that is harmful to others in sometimes, just for their self-interest. For instance, if people betray the trust of their business partners or do not fulfil their promises, they will not work together and social cohesion will be under threat.
However, it is unavoidable that laws restrict private liberty or even restrain social development in sometimes. Such as business laws, which may bring about the shrinkage of business activity, but it also ensures a healthy market environment in the long term. Or such as high levy high income tax for high-income citizens, which may lead to those people losing their enthusiasm to create wealth, but it can reduce the gap between the rich and the poor. Maybe it can be useful to promote social progress that the governments release some restriction in some area, and encourage people to innovate.
It is obvious that society will be a mess if there are no laws or rules to regulate. Even though laws can not allow everyone to act at will, the main purpose of laws is to create a society that people can live in harmony.
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