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One of my favorite TV shows Hi! I'm going to talk about my favorite TV show in my language school. Please, help me to correct this speech. Today I would like to talk about one of my favorite TV shows. «Dark» by Netflix is the most gripping, most shocking and most amazing time-travel story I have ever seen. The story starts simply enough. In the small German town of Winden, the disappearance of a child remind about similar incident 33 years before. There are four main families with their own secrets. At the centre of it all is a mysterious cave, a nuclear power plant, and a time-traveller who brings more questions than answers. Anyway, it is not a trivial sci-fi story. It’s just brilliant drama about family ties, and their effect on the past and future. Time travel often comes with conflicting alternative storylines and people's actions not making any sense. Dark is magical, but this magic isn't in altering the past. Instead, the real mysteries are all in the present, and people's backstories are crucial in understanding the main idea. Each character is special, all conversation and action is carefully considered in the general plot. This story looks like truly believable because this scriptwriting makes sense. When people have information that another should know for safety, they tell one another. Mothers know something dark about their husband? They tells her kids. Police officer works without departmental approval? He inform his colleagues. The music, cinematography and historical clothing is amazing and quality. The acting of this German cast is phenomenal and impressive. Every character’s story is unique and remarkable! My personal favourite is a person of a thorny destiny – Mikkel. And I really admire Ulrich. This show debuted three years ago, and I was really impressed with the first episodes. The first season was incredible. It’s like a stimulant to the brain. However, you should try note every character's name on a paper.. First time it will be hard to remember all name and family ties. The final season arrives in 2020, and I can’t wait.

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One of my favorite TV shows

Hi! I'm going to talk about my favorite TV show in my language school. Please, help me to correct this speech.

Today I would like to talk about one of my favorite TV shows. «Dark» by Netflix is the most gripping, most shocking and most amazing TIME TRAVELl story I have ever seen.
The story starts simply enough. In the small German town of Winden, the disappearance of a child remindS THE PEOPLE OF A similar incident 33 years before. There are four main families with their own secrets. At the centre of it all is a mysterious cave, a nuclear power plant, and a time-traveler who brings more questions than answers. Anyway, it is not a trivial sci-fi story. It’s just brilliant drama about family ties, and their effect on the past and future.
Time travel often comes with conflicting alternative storylines and people's actions not making any sense. Dark is magical, but this magic isn't USED in altering the past. Instead, the real mysteries are all in the present, and people's backstories are crucial in understanding the main idea. Each character is special, AND all conversation and action is carefully considered in the general plot.
This story looks like truly believable because THE scriptwriting makes sense. When people have information that another should know for safety, they tell one another. IF mothers know something dark about their husband, they tells her kids. IF a police officer works without departmental approval, he inform his colleagues.
The music, cinematography and historical clothing is amazing and HIGH quality. The acting of this German cast is phenomenal and impressive. Every character’s story is unique and remarkable! My personal favourite is a person of a thorny destiny – Mikkel. And ALSO I really admire Ulrich.
This show debuted three years ago, and I was really impressed with the first episodes. The first season was incredible. It’s like a stimulant to the brain. However, you should try TO note every character's name on paper BECAUSE it will be hard to remember all names and family ties. The final season arrives in 2020, and I can’t wait.
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One of my favorite TV shows

Hi! I'm going to talk about my favorite TV show in my language school. Please help me to correct this speech.

Today I would like to talk about one of my favorite TV shows. «Dark» by Netflix is the most gripping, most shocking and most amazing time-travel story I have ever seen.
The story starts simply enough. In the small German town of Winden, the disappearance of a child resembles a similar incident 33 years before. There are four main families with their own secrets. At the centre of it all is a mysterious cave, a nuclear power plant, and a time-traveller who brings more questions than answers. Anyway, it is not a trivial sci-fi story. It’s just a brilliant drama about family ties, and their effect on the past and future.
Time travel often comes with conflicting alternative storylines and people's actions not making any sense. Dark is magical, but this magic isn't in altering the past. Instead, the real mysteries are all in the present, and people's back-stories are crucial in understanding the main idea. Each character is special, all conversation and action is carefully considered in the general plot.
This story looks truly believable because this scriptwriting makes sense. When we have information that others should know for safety, we tell them. A mother knows something dark about their husband? She tells her kids. A police officer works without departmental approval? He inform his colleagues.
The music, cinematography and period costumes is amazing and quality. The acting of this German cast is phenomenal and impressive. Every character’s story is unique and remarkable! My personal favourite is a person with a thorny destiny – Mikkel. And I really admire Ulrich.
This show debuted three years ago, and I was really impressed with the first episodes. The first season was incredible. It’s like a stimulant to the brain. However, you should note every character's name on a paper.. First time it will be hard to remember all names and family ties. The final season arrives in 2020, and I can’t wait.
Very well described. I'm hooked! Well, I would be if I had a TV.

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