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A Rainy Day At The Park Gloria used to go to the park on the weekends accompanied by her parents to have some leisure time. Usually, before leaving from home she grabbed a couple of toys like a plastic ball, a pair of rackets, and her bicycle of course. At the park, Gloria met some children either from her neighborhood or another areas, since it was the central park of the city. For the bigger part of her staying at the park Gloria spent the time with her parents. For them, it was the best part of the week as their everyday responsibilities at work and later at home didn't leave much time for family activities. However, Gloria wouldn't deny a call from the other children to join them for a team game like soccer or volleyball. Then, her mam and dad could speak with another parents or buy a cup of coffee and attend her daughter having fun! A Saturday that the weather was rainy, her parents decided to stay home to relax by playing a table game or watching a cartoon on TV. However, this decision made Gloria sad. She loved the park and wanted so much to see the tall trees and feed the ducks. Her parents didn't want to refuse her a walk outside. Thus, they took their umbrellas and drove to the park. Due to the weather conditions there were not so many people there. The park was almost empty. Despite this, Gloria did not lose her good mood. She and her parents, approach the ducks at the little lake and fed them. Then, they walk for a while gazing the colorful trees and the birds. The nature was so marvelous at the park that Gloria was totally speechless. Her parents realized that, for Gloria a walk at the park was so worthy that even with no friends around and her toys she was fulfilled.

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A Rainy Day At The Park

Gloria used to go to the park on the weekends, accompanied by her parents, to have some leisure time. Usually, before leaving from home she grabbed a couple of toys like a plastic ball, a pair of rackets, and her bicycle, of course. At the park, Gloria met some children either from her neighborhood or another areas, since it was the central park of the city. For the bigger part of her staying at the park Gloria spent the time with her parents. For them, it was the best part of the week as their everyday responsibilities at work and later at home didn't leave much time for family activities. However, Gloria wouldn't deny a call from the other children to join them for a team game like soccer or volleyball. Then, her mam and dad could speak with another parents or buy a cup of coffee and attend watch her daughter having fun! A One Saturday that when the weather was rainy, her parents decided to stay home to relax by playing a table game or watching a cartoon on TV. However, this decision made Gloria sad. She loved the park and wanted so much to see the tall trees and feed the ducks. Her parents didn't want to refuse her a walk outside. Thus, they took their umbrellas and drove to the park. Due to the weather conditions there were not so many people there. The park was almost empty. Despite this, Gloria did not lose her good mood. She and her parents approached the ducks at the little lake and fed them. Then they walked for a while gazing the colorful trees and the birds. The nature was so marvelous at the park that Gloria was totally speechless. Her parents realized that, for Gloria, a walk at the park was so worthy rewarding that even with no friends or her toys around and her toys she was fulfilled.

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