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my happened today today is Thursday。on my way to work,I heard a very pleasant to hear song in my Mobile phone.its name is 《the funeral》,It is the author of band of horses

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What my happened today.

Today is Thursday. On my way to work, I heard a very pleasantto hear song in on my mobile phone. Its name is called, "The Funeral," It is the author of by Band of Horses.

Well done! From an Australian perspective, I think these corrections make it sound more natural.

Also, you don't need to say "to hear" because you've already said "I heard" at the start of the sentence :)

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