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Books I like (2) When I was younger, I actually did not enjoy reading books. At that time, there were so many things I enjoy like hanging out with friends and listening to music. Most of all, I did not need to deeply think about myself or the world around me. I got interested in books as I became older. I began to think about my life, and books were really helpful for that. They provided new perspectives and made me think about many crucial questions that can arise as people grow up. Thanks to books, I got to be able to think outside the box. Even if there are a lot of things full of exciting attractions, I believe books will be still powerful media in the modern and future world. *Please correct my sentences in a natural way (by correcting or rewriting sentences). Thanks a lot!

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Books I like (2)

When I was younger, I actually did not enjoy reading books. At that time, there were so many things I enjoyed like hanging out with friends and listening to music. Most of all, I did not need to deeply think about myself or the world around me. I got interested in books as I became older. I began to think about my life, and books were really helpful for that. They provided new perspectives and made me think about many crucial questions that can arise as people grow up. Thanks to books, I became able to think outside the box. Even if there are a lot of things full of exciting attractions, I believe books will be still powerful media in the modern and future world.

*Please correct my sentences in a natural way (by correcting or rewriting sentences). Thanks a lot!


This very accurate Sonny!

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