Cook food
Hello everyone, today I am writing about how to cook food to eat. Today we study to cook fried tofu. Fried tofu is very easy. We need the supplies like when we cook the fried chicken wings. The supplies we need have oil, tofu, and a pan. First we must clean the tofu, next we take the oil in the pan and then we can put the tofu in it. When you fried the tofu, you must remember is tofu it’s very soft and it's very easy flammable side you must be careful when you cook it. It very delicious when you have can know how to cook it. The end. In this lesson today can you cook the fried tofu now. Me I can cook it now. Because in this dinner today, my family will buy the tofu. Thank you very much for read my post and fix it everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
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Hello everyone, today I am writing about how to cook food to eat (1). Today we study will learn how (1) to cook fried tofu. Fried tofu is very easy. We need the same supplies as when we cook the fried chicken wings. The supplies we need have These are oil, tofu, and a pan. First we must clean the tofu, next we take heat (2) the oil in the pan and then we can put the tofu in it. When you fried fry the tofu, you must remember is that tofu (3) it’s very soft and it's very easy flammable side to burn, so you must be careful when you cook it (3). It very delicious when you have can know how to cook it. The end. In this lesson today can you cook the fried tofu now. Me I can cook it now. Because in this dinner today, my family will buy the tofu (4). Thank you very much for reading my posts and fixing it them everyday. Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
(0) might be better to say, "today i've written some cooking tips" or "I'm writing some cooking advice"
(1) if you want to say in the past tense it is "we studied how to cook", which I think is wrong in this context. As you are showing us how to do something it's better in the future tense and with the verb "learn". The reader (we) "will learn to how to cook tofu" by reading the article.
(2) "heat" is better and more descriptive
(3) is correct but dont need the repetition.
(4) last part is a little strange, maybe could round off with. "Now you've learned to cook tofu, you can start making it right away. My family are buying some today, so I will have some tonight".
But overall, pretty good. Well done! Nice note.
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Cook food
Hello everyone, today I am writing about how to cook food to eat. Today we studied how to cook fried tofu. Fried tofu is very easy. We need the same supplies as when we cook fried chicken wings. The supplies we need are oil, tofu, and a pan. First we must clean the tofu, next we put the oil in the pan and then we can put the tofu in it. When you fry the tofu, you must remember it’s very soft and it's very easy to burn, you must be careful when you cook it. It's very delicious when you know how to cook it. The result of this lesson is to be able to cook fried tofu. I can cook it now, and for dinner today, my family will buy the tofu. Thank you very much for reading my post and fixing it.Thank you very much. Goodbye and good night everyone.
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