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School School started two days ago and I'm doing all right. I got a few new classmates and I'm already making friends with them! I hope all of you have a good day. :-)

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Grattis! I think you need to begin with a definite form here i.e. "The school" or "My school". I would also write I'm doing "well" unless I had some reservations. "All right" means to me "acceptable" and "ok" but not really fine.
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Wow! This is a flawless piece of work. Congratulations!
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School

School started two days ago, and I'm doing all right. I got a few new classmates, and I'm already making friends with them! I hope all of you have a good day/night.

Note:

When two independent clauses are connected by a coordinate conjunction, always use a comma before the conjunction.

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School

School started two days ago and I'm doing all right. I got a few new classmates and I'm already making friends with them! I hope all of you have a good day/night. :-)

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