My day I have a good day. I woke up at 6:00 am, I eated my breakfast and I m ready. I went to my mom at the hospital for her therapy. After this I come back my bedroom and stay in home all day.

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Zuleyma A.

My day I have a good day. I woke up at 6:00 am, I eated my breakfast and I m ready. I went to my mom at the hospital for her therapy. After this I come back my bedroom and stay in home all day. I talk with my friend a long time on Skype, learning ingles with he! I like talk with he because he learn Spanish with me, I like listen speak English. I want more friends that I can help you his Spanish. Right now I watching tv. I see the good girl show on Netflix . tomorrow I write about to like this show. Someone want practice your Spanish with me, I am available. Good night everybody!

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My day

I had a good day.

I woke up at 6:00 am, I ate my breakfast and I got ready.

I went with my mom to the hospital for her therapy.

After this I came back to my bedroom and stayed in home all day.

I talked with my friend a long time on Skype, learning ingles with him!

I like talking with him because he learns Spanish with me, I like listening to him (?) speak English.

I want more friends that I can help with Spanish.

Right now I am watching tv.

I watch (am watching?) the good girl on Netflix. Tomorrow I will write about liking this show.

If someone wants to practice their Spanish with me, I am available.

Good night everybody!

One thing I recommend you watch out for is the tense of the verbs you're using.

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