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three on the boat - summary 4 people : George, Harris, hero and Montmorency sat in a room and spoke about each other illnesses. No one knew what happened to them, but they decided that it was a malaise caused by overwork. Harris suggested that need a rest and a change of scene. He suggested a walk on the sea. After a brief argument the characters decided that this was a good idea. Only Montmorancy was against this idea. But since there were 3 people against 1 the decision was made. The heroes spread out the map and began to discuss. Hero and Harris will go out in the morning and take the boat to Hell, and George will meet them there. While the characters were discussing the trip the question raised where they would spent the night. Having decide on a bed for the night, the characters began to discuss what belonging to take with them. Harris said that was enough for him for the day, and suggested a glass of whisky. George and Harris agreed. All questions were rescheduled for tomorrow. Harris suggested dividing up the duties and making a list of belonging. He took charge of the preparations. But the hero said that he would not allow himself to take on so much work. After a short discussion it was decided to give the list to George. George suggested taking bathroom supplies, a change of underwear (lots of socks and handkerchiefs)( in case they turned over). He also offered to take a boat with an awning. It is much easier this way. The question of food remained. When the issue of food was resolved, the heroes took all their belongings to one place and gathered in the evening to pack them. The hero said that he will be able to do it. When the hero collected the bag, it turned out that soon it is necessary to leave, but not all belonging were collected. Harris and George volunteered to help the hero. It turned out that they were very nasty helpers and they managed to make a big mess. Having packed all the things the heroes went to bed and asked George to wake them up at 6.30 am. In the morning, the hero was woken up by Mrs. Poets and found that they had overslept. The hero woke up Harrison and accused him of not having woken him. After a brief argument about who was supposed to wake who, the heroes went to get ready. After breakfast, the hero, Montmorency, and Harrison arrived at Waterloo. They began to ask where the train left at 11.05. No one knew where the train was going no matter who they asked. In the end they were asked to go to Kingston.

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three on the boat - summary

4 people : George, Harris, hero (Hero) and Montmorency sat in a room and spoke about each other (each others / one another's illnesses) illnesses. No one knew what happened to them, but they decided that it was a malaise caused by overwork. Harris suggested that (they) need(ed) a rest and a change of scene. He suggested a walk on (on?? can they walk on water? - by the sea might work nicely) the sea. After a brief argument, the characters decided that this was a good idea. Only Montmorancy was against this idea. But since there were 3 people against 1, the decision was made. The heroes spread out their map and began to discuss. Hero and Harris will go out in the morning and take the boat to Hell, and George will meet them there. While the characters were discussing the trip, the question raised where they would spent the night. (Close! - They raised the question about where they would spend the night.) Having decided on a bed for the night, the characters began to discuss what belonging which belongings to take with them. Harris said that was enough for him for the day, and suggested a glass of whisky. George and Harris agreed. All questions were rescheduled for tomorrow. Harris suggested dividing up the duties and making a list of belongings. He took charge of the preparations. But the hero (is Hero his name? make sure this is clear to the reader) said that he would not allow himself to take on so much work. After a short discussion, it was decided to give the list to George the list would be given to George. George suggested taking bathroom supplies, a change of underwear -- (lots of socks and handkerchiefs -- in case they turned over). He also offered to take a boat with an awning. It is was much easier this way. The question of food remained. When the issue of food was resolved, the heroes took all their belongings to one place and gathered in the evening to pack them. The hero said that he will would be able to do it. When By the time the hero collected the bag, it turned out that soon it is was necessary to leave, but not all belongings were collected. Harris and George volunteered to help the hero. It turned out that they were very nasty helpers and they managed to make a big mess. Having packed all the things at last, the heroes went to bed and asked George to wake them up at 6.30 am. In the morning, the hero was woken up by Mrs. Poets and found that they had overslept. The hero woke up Harrison and accused him of not having woken him. After a brief argument about who was supposed to wake who, the heroes** went to get ready. After breakfast, the hero, Montmorency, and Harrison arrived at Waterloo. They began to ask where the train left at 11.05 train that departed at 11:05 was headed to. No one knew where the train was going no matter who they asked. In the end, they were asked to go to Kingston.

**Here you say 'the heroes' but then at the beginning of the story, you mention one of the characters is Hero. This can make things a little unclear for the reader.
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three on the boat - summary

4 people : George, Harris, hero and Montmorency sat in a room and spoke about each other illnesses. No one knew what happened to them, but they decided that it was a malaise caused by overwork. Harris suggested that need they needed a rest and a change of scenery. He suggested a walk on by the sea. After a brief argument [discussion?], the characters men/they decided that this was a good idea. Only Montmorancy was against this idea, but . But since there were 3 people against 1, the decision was made. The heroes spread out the map and began to discuss. Hero and Harris will would go out in the morning and take the boat to Hell, and George will would meet them there. While the characters Whilst they were discussing the trip, the question raised arose as to where they would spent spend the night. Having decide decided on a bed [hotel?] for the night, the characters men/group began to discuss what belonging belongings (almost always plural when used as a noun I believe) to take with them. Harris said that was enough for him for the day, and suggested a glass of whisky. George and Harris agreed. All questions were rescheduled for tomorrow [suggest: All remaining questions were postponed to the next day]. Harris suggested dividing up the duties and making a list of belongings. He took charge of the preparations. But (never start a sentence with but) The hero said that he would could not allow himself to take on so much work. After a short discussion it was decided to give the list to George. George suggested taking bathroom supplies, a change of underwear (lots of socks and handkerchiefs)( in case they turned over capsized?). He also offered to take a boat with an awning. It is would be much easier this way. The question of food remained. When the issue of food was resolved, the heroes took all their belongings to one place and gathered in the evening to pack them. The hero said that he will would be able to do it. When the hero collected the bag, it turned out that soon it is necessary to leave they had to leave soon, but even though not all belongings were had been collected. Harris and George volunteered to help the hero. It turned out that they were very nasty poor helpers and they managed to make a big mess. Having packed all the things the heroes went to bed and asked George to wake them up at 6.30am. In the morning, the hero was woken up by Mrs. Poets and found that they had overslept. The hero woke up Harrison and accused him of not having woken him. After a brief argument about who was supposed to wake who, the heroes went to get ready. After breakfast, the hero, Montmorency, and Harrison arrived at Waterloo. They began to asked where the train left at 11.05 for the platform from which the 11:05 train would depart from. No one knew where the train was going no matter who they asked. In the end they were asked to go to Kingston. [Last two sentences are not clear to me! Hope this helps.]

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