hermit crab..describing a picture
The background blurred in the distance, a hermit crab putting out its legs on the beach scattered with rough stones in uneven sizes. The spiral shell covers his body. It's unaware of the photographer shooting a picture of him.
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hermit crab..describing a picture
The background blurred in the distance, a hermit crab putting out its legs on the beach scattered with rough stones in uneven sizes. The spiral shell covers his body. It's unaware of the photographer shooting a picture of him.
This conjures up a lovely scene. You need to choose, however, whether the crab is 'him' or 'it' and be consistent.
The background is blurred in the distance. A hermit crab is putting out its legs on a beach scattered with rough stones of uneven sizes. A spiral shell covers its body. It's unaware of the photographer shooting a picture of it.
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hermit crab..describing a picture
The background is blurred in the distance, a hermit crab is putting out its legs. It's on a beach scattered with rough stones in uneven sizes. A spiral shell covers itsbody. It's unaware of the photographer taking a picture of him.
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There's nothing to correct here- great work!
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