Reading

I plan to read 20 (Here I would use the written form 'twenty', as it is in a paragraph of text - but both forms are correct!) books every year. since As of today, I have finished ('completed/achieved' would be better) this my goal of for this year.
Reading is very important. From reading, we can get (see/discover) others experiences, opinions, methods ,and so on. Also we can expand our eye shot. (?? Horizons?)
I think the most key important thing about reading is that you must read the right books, by this I mean the good (best) books. There are tens of thousands of books in the world, and also there are also many more books were that are published every day. Not all of them are useful. Only good the best books can give us edification, suggestion, training. The bad worst books may lead us to down the wrong path. Most of time, we wonder which books is are good or bad.
The first step, I think, you should know is to find out which books are good and which are bad. If u you do not know, you can ask your teacher or your grand old man to introduce some good books for you. Reading world famous books also are a better choice is also effective.
Hoping Let's hope we can all of us can get what we want from books.

Reading

I plan to read twenty books every year. As of today, I have achieved my goal for this year.
Reading is very important. From reading, we can discover others experiences, opinions, methods ,and so on. Also we can expand our horizons.
I think the most important thing about reading is that you must read the right books, by this I mean the best books. There are tens of thousands of books in the world, and there are also many more books that are published every day. Not all of them are useful! Only the best books can give us edification, suggestion, training. The worst books may lead us down the wrong path. Most of time, we wonder which books are good or bad.
The first step, I think, is to find out which books are good and which are bad. If you do not know, you can ask your teacher or your grand old man to introduce some good books for you. Reading world famous books is also effective.
Let's hope we can all get what we want from books.

You're doing great, keep it up!