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こんにちは、みなさん! 私は日本語を学びます。日本人といっしょに日本語で手紙を書きたい。

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こんにちは、みなさん!

私は日本語を学んでいますびます。日本人といっしょに日本語で手紙を書きたい。

Hello,Тимур Жуков 3. I'm glad to assist you.
"学びます" includes connotation that you will learn Japanese for now, so I changed the word to "学んでいます." When you wrote "日本人といっしょに,"you would express it that Japanese people and you sent mails to someone. I suppose you hope to be correspondance with Japanese. If so, You didn't have to wrote "いっしょに." 

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一緒に頑張てください。
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頑張ってください。 何について 手紙ですか。

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