EXPRESSING YOUR OPINION
WRITTING 6: EXPRESSING YOUR OPINION
Nowadays you can download a lot of music or films without cost, you don´t need to pay to get them. People are thought that it is normal but not, it´s a crime. There are some rules which people ought to respect.
Firstly, everyone could think that it is really a normal use but it´s as if you steal in a shop a book, as if to go to the cinema and won´t pay your cinema ticket, etc. In addition, you are making the culture die in some way and you are doing a theft and aren´t respecting copyright.
Secondly, we should understand that the creators need to earn money to do a normal life, because they have to can have a home, buy food, pay their electricity bills, etc. Then if we don´t pay they couldn´t have an honest life, they couldn´t spend her time creating because they will need time for work in another job.
On the other hand, there are free culture which you can get them through creative commons or copy left, you can used them without cost. If you use this plays you are helping emergent artists and you will cheers them.
Finally, if you don´t pay to enjoy culture then it will die because nobody will directed or producer films, nobody will be painter, nobody will be musician, nobody will be writer, etc. So please, we should think about this and be more fair.
In conclusion, the culture needs to be supported for people around the world. Save the culture.
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Thank Michelle
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(Here are some ideas to make it sound more native. See below and please note that I crossed off some words or parts of words that were un-needed. I hope this helps!)
These days you can download a lot of music or film without cost: you don´t need to pay to get them. People think that downloading is normal, but it is not. It´s a crime. There are some rules which people should respect. First, people may think that it is really common to download music, but it´s as if you are stealing in a shop a book or as if you go to the movies and don't pay your movie cinema ticket. In addition, you are killing culture in some way. You are committing a theft and you aren´t respecting copyright. Secondly, we should understand that the creators need to earn money to live a normal life, because they should be able to have a home, buy food, pay their electricity bills, etc. If we don´t pay them to have an honest life, they can't spend their her time creating because they will need time for work another job. On the other hand, there are free options which you can get free music or films through called "creative commons" or "copy left". Here, you can get music and movies used and without cost. If you use these options, you are helping emergent artists and you will be supporting their work. Finally, if you don´t pay to enjoy culture, then it will die, because nobody will direct or produce films. Nobody will be a painter. Nobody will be musician. Nobody will be writer. So please, we should think about this and be more fair. The music and film culture needs to be supported for people around the world. Save the culture.
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Ohhh only is an exercise it isn’t my really opinion. Sorry
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Oh ,don’t tottally agree .This actually the 21st century and who cares ?That’s how it works .We get something free,other people get something from us .It is all connected .I don’t think that’s really some type of crime .Creators in good money condition and I should note that all kind of movies download on google only after premier .Therefore ,if you are a student and surviving month by month it’s a good opportunity to relax and get free pleasure.
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