I need just speak to someone. Would you like?

It is my first diary entry. I want to learn the English language to sing English songs and understand videos on youtube. I am a musician, I play the bass guitar. I like jazz and pop styles in music. I hope this diary can help me learn English. You will need to add 'is' after 'it'. You will add 'the' before English because it is a proper noun. 'E' in English will also be capitalised for the same reason. There is no need to add a comma(,) after language because there is no separate clause. You will also use the plural form of video, because there are a lot of videos on youtube, which is videos. You will add 'a' before musician since an article is required. It is more appropriate to write 'I am a musician who plays the bass guitar.' Also, the plural form of style, which is styles, will be used since you like two styles.