English writing practice (3 May)
1. I assumed he comes from England because of his English accent.
2. To learn from the experts can minimize the effert, time and frustration.
3. He let his company gone bankrupt not because he didn't have money, just because he didn't want to pay debts.
4. The two concurrent programs let his old laptop became very slow.
5. The COVID-19 outbreak halted most international flights.
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2. To learn from the experts can minimize the effert, time and frustration.
I am looking for a verb at the end of this ... my gut says that the sentence isn't complete.
To learn from the experts can minimize the effort, time and frustration required.
(Usually, frustration would be "caused" rather than "required", but "effort" and "time" require the verb "required".)
Interestingly, to me anyway, deleting the "the" makes the original sentence complete without an additional verb.
Hence:
To learn from the experts can minimize effort, time and frustration.
"the effort" NEEDS "to learn a language" OR "required".
"effort" - stands alone without needing a verb or verbal phrase.
That's just my gut instinct.
3. He let his company go bankrupt not because he didn't have money, just because he didn't want to pay debts.
just OR but. Arguable. I prefer "just".
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English writing practice (3 May)
1. I assumed he came from England because of his English accent.
2. Learning from the experts can minimize the effort, time and frustration.
3. He let his company go bankrupt not because he didn't have money, just because he didn't want to pay debts.
4. The two concurrent programs let his old laptop become very slow.
5. The COVID-19 outbreak halted most international flights.
My English writing practice today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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English writing practice (3 May)
1. Excellent!
2. To learn from the Learning from experts can minimize the effert effort, time and frustration.
3. He let his company gone go bankrupt not because he didn't have money, just but because he didn't want to pay debts.
4. The two concurrent programs let made his old laptop became become very slow.
5. Perfect!
My English writing practice today.
Thanks for your kind help.
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