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Some opinion about those junior trainees for Olympic Game My writing: Under the financial support of countries, some children are trained to be professional athletes from a young age. Personally, I disapprove of this early training, given the detrimental effect of it on the growth of children. Those international large games are an appropriate stage for various countries show their muscle of technologies and improve fame on the world. Some critics once said Olympic Game is a battle field without powder. Therefore, most countries invest massive fund to seek gifted children and cultivate them as early as possible, so they can win medals on international tournaments. Once they stand on podium, the national flag of their countries will be rose. With the fame earned in games, countries may have more international cooperation and certain weight of speech on international conferences. However, the process of training cause abnormal development to children. The shape of their limbs may become deformed as a result of the excessive exercises. And when they retire, they are probably afflicted by the sequela of injury got in competition. Furthermore, being the athletes who have the qualification of participate in Olympic Game need to push their body to limit again and again during the training, which is a dangerous and painful thing for normal people. Therefore, if those children knew the miserable process and irrevocable abnormal of body, would they still choose this way? From my perspective, it is unacceptable that children are trained before they grow to mature state. Before their body can take those intense exercise and their mind can realize the risk and pain of this process, we should not compel them to exercise. Moreover, the purpose of sports is to improve physical quality and the purpose of Olympic Game is to prevent war. Nowadays, medals and fame become the sole target of sport, and game is a new battel field. So , I completely oppose that countries encourage children to attend training.

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Some opinion about those junior trainees for Olympic Game

My writing:
Under the financial support of countries, some children are trained to be professional athletes from a young age. Personally, I disapprove of this early training, given the detrimental effect of it on the growth of children.

Those international large games are an appropriate stage for various countries to show their muscle of technologies and improve their fame in the world. Some critics once said the Olympic Games is a battle field without powder. Therefore, most countries invest massive funds to seek gifted children and cultivate them as early as possible, so they can win medals at international tournaments. Once they stand on the podium, the national flag of their countries will be risen. With the fame earned at the games, countries may have more international cooperation and certain weight of speech on international conferences.

However, the process of training cause abnormal development to children. The shape of their limbs may become deformed as a result of the excessive exercises. And when they retire, they are probably afflicted by the sequela of injury received in competition. Furthermore, being the athletes who have the qualification to participate in the Olympic Games they need to push their body to limit again and again during the training, which is a dangerous and painful thing for normal people. Therefore, if those children knew the miserable process and irrevocable abnormal of damage to their body, would they still choose this way?

From my perspective, it is unacceptable that children are trained before they grow to mature state. Before their body can take those intense exercise and their mind can realize the risk and pain of this process, we should not compel them to exercise. Moreover, the purpose of sports is to improve physical quality and the purpose of the Olympic Games is to prevent war. Nowadays, medals and fame become the sole target of sport, and the games are a new battel field. So , I completely oppose that countries encourage children to attend training.

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