Climacteric changes
These days, my father has become a big fan of an on-going Korean drama called the King which has been also provided on Netflix. The drama is a kind of romantic fantasy. I think, because of that, my father fall in love with it, and furthermore my father might have climacteric changes, so his sensitivity might change in a more sentimental way like what a girl has. I think, this change also affects his emotion, so my father sometimes sheds tears watching TV dramas or movies. It is intriguing since even my mother and I do not feel sad in many cases when my father is crying and touched. Is my father really experiencing my teenager indirectly by riding a time machine called climacterium?
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Hi bjing2 :) Very well written. I have just edited it a bit, because when writing in English it is good to have a mixture of short and long sentences. This keeps the reader interested in the text. Please see changes below:
Climacteric changes
These days, my father has become a big fan of an on-going Korean drama called the King which has been also provided on Netflix.
These days my father has become a big fan of an on-going Korean drama called 'the King', which can be viewed on Netflix .
The drama is a kind of romantic fantasy.
I think, because of that, my father fall fell in love with it, and furthermore my father might have climacteric changes, so his sensitivity might change in a more sentimental way like what a girl has.
I think,my father fell in love with it. He might have climacteric changes, causing him to be more sensitive and sentimental, like the way a girl would feel.
I think, this change also affects his emotions, so my father sometimes sheds tears watching TV dramas or movies.
It is intriguing since even my mother and I do not feel sad in many cases when my father is crying and touched.
Is my father really experiencing my teenager teen years indirectly by riding a time machine called climacterium?
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Climacteric changes
These days, my father has become a big fan of an on-going Korean drama called the King which has been also also been provided on Netflix. The drama is a kind of romantic fantasy. I think, because of that, my father fall has fallen in love with it, and furthermore my father might have be going through/be experiencing climacteric changes, so his sensitivity might can change in a more sentimental way, like a girl'swhat a girl has. I think this change also affects his emotion, so my father sometimes sheds tears watching TV dramas or movies. It is intriguing since even my mother and I do not feel sad in many cases when my father is crying and touched. Is my father really experiencing my teenager (do you mean 'having the experience of a teenager'?) indirectly by riding travelling through a time machine called climacterium?
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