Fictitious situation - III
Today I woke up with headache and with a sadness heart. Everything what I lived during this years with you was the best time of my life, but I see the end of all this, because you don't mind sufficiently. It's look like you don't do effort, you don't pray for us, you don't see our future as a glad thing to live, because you just see the difficulties. If it is my fault or yours, we need the force to go foward!, because we are together in that, don't we? You see we are poor, but we was rich in the past. Rich of hope.
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Fictitious situation - III
Today I woke up with a headache and a sad heart. These past years with you have been the best of my life, but sadly, I see it ending because you don't care enough. You don't put forth sufficient effort, you don't pray for us, you don't see a bright future for us because you only focus on the problems. Is it my fault or yours? We need the will to go forward! We're in this together, aren't we?
You see now we are poor, but we were rich once. Rich with hope.
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Fictitious situation - III
Today I woke up with headache and a sad heart. All these years with you were the best time in my life, but I see an end to all of this, because you don't care enough. It's like you make no effort, you don't pray for us, you don't see our future as a joyous thing to live, because you just see the difficulties. If it is my fault or yours, we need the force to go foward!, Because we are together in that, aren't we? You see we are poor, but we were rich in the past. Rich in hope.
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Hello. Thank you for care about that. Best regards.
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I read this notebook entry, and started to think, oh, that is so sad ... a really sincere statement from someone with problems in their life ...
Then I reread the title. "Fictitious situation."
And I was pleased. Pleased that there is no one hurting. And I was also pleased that you can write that well - to make me feel the situation. :)
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