Leave home for first time(writing practice)
It was summer, the heat intensified day by day. I joined a summer camp, training teenagers to accompany children who are homeless by telling stories, singing songs and doing some handiwork. The camp required to stay in a campus for two weeks, that we had to train in the first week and do practical training in the second week. Although it was not really a long days, I still feel a little bit tense. Nevertheless, I thought it was a meaningful activity, making me more dependable, more responsible, and more positive that could help these children who needed love and kindness. Before start off, I cleaned up my room, and packed my baggage with some personal items, clothes and medical drugs. Also I carried some of my favorite CD along with me at the lonely night. Then I said “Goodbye” to my family and walked to the brand-new day.
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The essay is my writing practice... so I hope you could currect my grammer and diction.And also hope you could give some suggestion to help my essay has more depth :))
Thank you very much!!!
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